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Scene: goal, obstacle, decision, tension

How to Show Tension in an Everyday Scene

March 14, 2026 | 0

This article explains a simple way to create scene tension in fiction. A strong scene shows a character with a goal, an obstacle in the way, and a decision about what to do next.

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